This comes from the New York Times article "New Scrutiny as Immigrants Die in Custody."
Original text:
"Complaints focus on a lack of independent oversight and failures to enforce standards for medical care, suicide prevention and access to legal help."
This statement contains a correlative conjunction that can be rewritten with parallelism:
"Complaints focus on a lack of independent oversight and [on a] failure to enforce standards for medical care, suicide prevention and access to legal help."
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